Assignment 2: LTA Impact Study - (reader response) draft 2
In
the news release, “Feasible for Cross Island MRT Line to run under Central
Catchment or skirt around it”, the Land Transport Authority (2019) addressed
that the new MRT line based on the report in which both are feasible and have
impacts on the environment. Nature groups mentioned that direct alignment
would affect the ecology and biodiversity. LTA claims that skirting
alignment poses a bigger threat to the standard of living for the residents
than direct alignment. Skirting route construction would cause issues such as
noise pollution, poorer air quality. The route would cost an additional of $2
billion and take a longer traveling duration of 6 minutes. The article
addresses the pros and cons of two feasible options. However, I feel that
direct alignment is much more practical in terms of cost and travel time for
the commuters.
Firstly, implementation of the direct alignment would reduce
the transportation fare for commuters. Cheng (2019) mentioned that Dr
Lam said “government should take into consideration the construction cost,
travel time, as well as potentially higher fares for the longer option that
skirts the reserve.” The cross-island line is forecast to have an estimated
daily commuter of 600,000 and will continue rising exponentially and over time
it will be the most heavily used rail line in Singapore. Figures A and B
portray how additional travel time of 5-6 minutes would affect the overall
travel fare by a range of 25 cents to 35 cents. The longer travel time and the
increment in overall travel fare will be deemed unfavourable among
Singaporeans. In my opinion, people would prefer a more convenient way of
traveling. Most Singaporeans would not be willing to pay an additional travel
fee to arrive at the same destination.
Secondly, the direct
alignment would reduce the overall construction by $2 billion which will
greatly benefit the commuter who are the taxpayer. In the article “$2b extra
cost if Cross Island Line Skirts Central Catchment Nature Reserve”, Chew (2016)
stated that the government would consider all factors including the distance
and travel time for commuters and the costs to taxpayers. The skirting route
takes a longer route of 11km as it requires more manpower and resources to
construct. Thus, leading to an increase in construction cost. The higher the
construction cost, the more taxes citizens will have to pay. In my opinion,
there will be a conflict of interest for the taxpayers as $2billion is not the
finalize value since it was a projected valuation.
Lastly,
the direct alignment would reduce the overall travel time by 6 minutes as
compared to skirting route. Ong (2019) mentioned that Prof Agarwal said “(They)
care about the reliability of reaching where (they) have to reach on time …
especially when there are work related issues.” He stated that there were
more working adults using trains as a mode of transportation than buses.
In my opinion, the government should prioritize working adults’ wellbeing as
they are the nation taxpayer. I feel that the working adults should not be
expected to squeeze for an additional 6 minutes due to the skirting route as it
instils a sense of frustration in them. In my opinion, the commuter can utilize the
additional 6 minutes for personal leisure or even spending more time with
family members. Many of them would not be happy to travel a longer distance.
Singapore
is a globalized and well-developed country, where people expect things to be
fast and convenient. By building the direct alignment, the government
will be able to save a hefty sum of money to focus on Singapore’s future
projects.
References
Cheng,
K. (2019 December 4). Govt will do ‘whatever it can’ to protect Central
Catchment Nature Reserve: Lam Pin Min. Today. https://www.todayonline.com/singapore/govt-will-do-whatever-it-can-protect-central-catchment-nature-reserve-lam-pin-min
Lee, P. (2016 October 12). More Singaporeans take bus, MRT to work: government survey. The Strait Times.https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/more-singaporeans-take-bus-mrt-to-work-government-survey
Lim, A. (2016 February 22). $2b extra cost if Cross Island Line skirts Central Catchment Nature Reserve. The Strait Time. https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/transport/2b-extra-cost-if-cross-island-line-skirts-central-catchment-nature-reserve
Ong,
J. (2019 November 24). NUS public transport study: Working adults want
reliable travel times; seniors, students focus on cost. Today.https://www.todayonline.com/working-adults-want-reliable-travel-times-public-transport-while-seniors-students-focus-fare-cost
Tan,
C. (2019, January 26). Cross Island Line's first phase to be completed by
2029. The Straits Times.https://www.straitstimes.com/singapore/transport/cross-island-lines-first-phase-to-be-completed-by-2029
Transit
Link (Diagram) https://www.transitlink.com.sg/eservice/eguide/rail_info.php
Appendix
Figure
A
Estimated
travel time and total fare for Punggol to Hougang
Figure
B
Estimated
travel time and total fare for Punggol to Serangoon
Revised 19th October
Dear Dexter,
ReplyDeleteThank you for allowing me to read your summary on said article! First of all, I felt that you have captured the content really well. Your first sentence highlighted the content of the article very clearly.
However, I found that there were some misalignments in your summary, namely:
- The title of that article that you quoted is not complete
- You used contradictory tenses in your reporting verbs (eg: “It proposed”, “LTA claims”)
- When one uses the article “the”, you are being specific. When you said “would affect the ecology and biodiversity,” you did not specify the subject (eg: “the ecology and biodiversity [of this place]”)
- The phrase “travelling duration” should be “travel duration” instead
All in all, I felt that you have done an excellent job summarizing the article. Thank you for your time!
Warm wishes,
Clement
Dear clement,
Deletethank you for the feedback, I make some changes to my summary and will be more specific in my post.
yours sincerely,
dexter